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[Clock Slot Machine]

ok

Its kind of hard to see what wins and what doesnt, but then again, I dont gamble ;)

There should be more combos, like each clock has a 3 combo exept for one 'dud'

Also try to get a looping music, so that it doesnt end.

Garlic-Clock responds:

DuH you're right I forgot to loop the music
I don't really understand what you mean by each clock could have a combo but maybe it's just because I'm tired I'll read it again later :)

[Dodge 3.0]

ugh

I was going to give it a 3 or 4 until I read the last part in your description. Please dont do that.

If you dont know what Im talking about its this:

"Please vote this high, it's definetly some nice work from a 13 year old! "

exfuga responds:

k... I think I have the right to say that while being one of the best kid's my age at flash... it's not like I couldn't brag more...

[Wonderland 3D World 2]

make it 2D

Please, just make it 2D. Youre not even making use of the 3D, so you could have a just as good drawing. Use Photoshop, you can make 3D like effects in that.

Also, if you want to make a smaller size dont put a hallway that you have to click the box 5 times. Make one box that brings you to one end and another that brings you to the other end.

Okay, now, gameplay. Try to make it a bit less straight forward. The first one you had to backtrack, but it was way shorter, and this one is straight forward but longer. Try to combine them.

Also, make it harder. Alot harder. Different areas and large places to explore. This is why I encourage you to use 2D graphics.

But all in all it looks like an exelent idea, keep up the good work!

potbellybob responds:

Sorry, but the name won't change to "Wonderland 2D" anytime soon. I don't think I'll use Photoshop, either. This project was just made to test Swift 3D. I will in the future make the game harder. A lot harder. I just don't want people giving up because it's too hard. World 1 and World 2 were both connected at first. I had to cut them in half to meet the 5 meg limit. Thanx for the review!